I L-Love You

I L Love You Jason fought with his tongue most of his life It ruined his relationship with his parents devastated his love life and eventually forced him to take refuge behind his own door even though intense lon

  • Title: I L-Love You
  • Author: Jacklynn Ray
  • ISBN: -
  • Page: 244
  • Format: Kindle Edition
  • Jason fought with his tongue most of his life It ruined his relationship with his parents, devastated his love life and eventually forced him to take refuge behind his own door even though intense loneliness ate at him every day Shy, a bit neurotic and hiding Jason is going to have an encounter that is just a little too close to his comfort zone from the door right nextJason fought with his tongue most of his life It ruined his relationship with his parents, devastated his love life and eventually forced him to take refuge behind his own door even though intense loneliness ate at him every day Shy, a bit neurotic and hiding Jason is going to have an encounter that is just a little too close to his comfort zone from the door right next to his.

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    1. I ve been reading my romance erotica trash soft porn did I get all the slang lol since I was a little to young to read them Haha But a hardcore fan was born, and since I m also a huge fan of romance novels I think the little mutant combination of both shows up in my writing I require my soft porn to be filled with love It s just not good enough that your body is flushed a bit after reading one of my books I want your heart involved as well I want a love story that is hot, not a hot story with some love It is my ultimate goal when I m writing When I m writing I also wear the second hat of the reader Would I like this if it weren t mine

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    1. There might have been a sweet romance in here.It would not have been groundbreakingly original as romances where one or both partners have a disability have already been written it would not have been perfect because of the author s habit of overdescribing.I would have been nice, though Unfortunately very little romance is to be found in paragraphs cluttered by disrupting typos, missing words and grammar mistakes when one needs to reread every other sentence because one does not understand it, o [...]


    2. Another serial story that didn t announce itself as such I was already annoyed by the too numerous to count grammar and spelling errors but the To Be Continued was the cherry on the crap cake This needs a serious edit.


    3. I picked up this book when it was offered free because I am always interested in stories with heroes or heroines who struggle with a disability In this case it is a young man, Jason, who has been rejected twice over First because he is gay by his parents and then by his boyfriend because of his stuttering It is a tough thing to get over and ends up turning Jason into an insecure recluse with just his faithful younger sister for a friend.All that changes when the hot neighbor, Brandon, moves in a [...]


    4. I m waiting to rate this until I read the sequel The editing is so bad that it makes the story difficult to read, but the concept is good Hopefully, the sequel will have better editing.


    5. I was intrigued and read the sample from before purchasing The first chapter was good but it seemed to steadily decline from there There were grammatical errors, no character history or character growth, misspelled words and the biggest issue I had was figuring out which protagonist was talking thinking I found myself going back and re reading a sentence to figure out what was going on, it was a bit everywhere I think the storyline had some potential but unfortunately fell through Not worth the [...]


    6. This story definitely needs to be edited Added missing words, missing commas, sometimes bad structure of sentences Looks like it was written with a text programm with bad auto correct you re your meet meant muster mustard.Also This story is not finished URG Why can t authors tell their readers that you only have a part of the story in front of you You re in the middle of a scene, one of the guys reflects on his feelings for the other and BAM To Be Continued This just makes me SOOOOO mad


    7. In major need of editing Spelling errors, problems with grammar, punctuation and all kinds of things It was hard to figure out the meaning of some sections of the narrative Honestly, it read like a bad fanfic with no editor beta That being said, I think with a lot of editing, it could be an okay good story The concept isn t a bad one, it just needs a lot of work on its execution But because of these issues, I couldn t get past the second chapter.


    8. Got hooked by the stuttering and shy person of Jason, I thought this would be a cute read but blegh Jason, he s fine but Brandon Brandon was too much of a flirt for my taste, a man slut but falls instantly for Jason because he s cute, okeyyyyy _ ahuh Boring, it s just boring and it s to be continued Great _


    9. I would have given 3 stats if wasn t for the terrible grammar mistakes It really put me off And to be continued Seriously 2 stats it is.


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